And here we are again! It's Wednesday which means it's WIP It Up Day!!
Again, I am not sharing a snippet for a WIP... I am having words with my current WIP so let's not go there. Instead let's take a look at a scene from a book that was once a WIP but is no longer, it has sprouted it's wings and blossomed into a full fledged novella :)
Call Me Yours is the story of two people falling in love, with a little phone sex and spankings thrown in. Oh, and regular sex too, it's not just all on the phone!
At this point in the story Simon was upset with something Caitlin had hid from him and he had promised retribution... in the form of a spanking. He also already decreed that she could not wear panties until further notice, she is not okay with either of these things.
She
reached into a laundry basket, that she assumed were clean clothes,
and rustled through until she found a pair of underwear. She was
about to slip them on when Simon grabbed her wrist.
"Absolutely
not, I was serious about what I said," he told her.
"What?"
she asked, and looked back at him in shock. "You cannot be
serious. You can't tell me that I'm not allowed to wear underwear."
"I'm
pretty sure I can," he answered, with a look so smug she wanted
to smack it right off his face. He tugged on her arm and pulled her
into the bed beside him.
"What
do you supposed you'll accomplish with that?" she wondered out
loud.
"For
one, it wouldn't kill you to learn how to follow directions, even if
it is something as meaningless as your underwear."
She
pulled her wrist from his grasp and folded her arms. Meaningless to
him maybe, but going commando could prove to be an uncomfortable
addition to her day to day life.
"And
secondly, I sort of like knowing that you'll be readily available to
me, whenever I want," he wiggled his eyebrows at her and leaned
his head in.
She
pushed him away, still annoyed at him telling her what to do, and
worried about this apparent spanking, "I told you, I'm tired."
"Alright
then," he said, pulling the covers back and guiding her under
them. "We'll just go to sleep."
She
tried to get comfortable as he wrapped his arms around her and
spooned her from behind, but where as other nights she found his
presence comforting, tonight it felt suffocating.
As
she let out a sigh and rotated her pillow again, punching it to
redistribute the stuffing, Simon propped up on his elbow and looked
at her.
"So,
you being so tired had nothing to do with my earlier warning that I
was going to spank you, right?"
"Hmm?"
she feigned innocence. "Oh, I had completely forgotten about
that."
"Really?"
he asked.
"Yeah,
I guess the sunshine and the alcohol and good time took a toll on me.
I'm just so tired, and forgot you had even said that."
Simon's
eyes never left her face, there was a streetlight outside her window,
lighting her room enough that they could clearly make out each
other's features.
"You're
a terrible liar," he told her, and then kissed the tip of her
nose.
She
let out a hrumph and flopped back onto her pillow.
Caitlin comes from a privileged
upbringing and has the reputation of being a bratty, spoiled
princess. Her father cuts her off financially when she refuses to
enter law school. Now she needs to figure out a way to make it on her
own, with no help from anyone. When her friend mentions taking on a
job as a phone sex operator, Caitlin has her misgivings, but when her
rent gets hiked and her bills start piling up she figures she has
nothing to lose.
Simon is the boy next door, literally.
He's a few years older than the recent college grad and he has no
time for immature girls who don't take life seriously-- especially
ones full of sass. But when Simon finds Caitlin in a dangerous
situation he is not above rescuing her, then scolding her, and
threatening her with a spanking.
Despite his old-fashioned ways, Caitlin
is head over heels for Simon, and the feeling is mutual. Can she come
to terms with Simon's methods for dealing with disobedience? Can
Simon curb his high-handed ways enough to not lose the girl he is
hopelessly falling in love with?
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I have a feeling that spanking she just got away with is going to happen soon ... just a guess :) Nice one, Casey.
ReplyDeleteI love your introduction to this post. "This was once a WIP, but has sprouted it's wings and became a novella." :-) It sounds like someone is going to be getting a spanking no matter how "tired" they are. Great snippet!
ReplyDeleteHe sounds like one masterful guy ,,, and I agree with the others - someone is going to get a spanking!
ReplyDeletehehe Caitlin sounds absolutely adorably spoiled :D
ReplyDeleteCasey, what a tease you are. I have to know. Does she get that spanking that night, or does he wait until morning?
ReplyDeleteI'm hoping it's that night. ☺
Great Excerpt.