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This is from my new work in progress. It is yet to be titled. It's also yet to be edited, and might change...
I actually normally never share stuff from WIPs because it makes me feel like I am letting people into my house and I forgot to put pants on.
This time is a little different though, I am almost finished writing this one, and I actually know how it's going to end! Unheard of around here! Normally I pull up straight to the end and I'm thinking "Boy, I hope these crazy kids can work it out..."
Okay, enough chit chat. Let me set this up for you. Caitlin lives next door to Simon. He is actually friends with her roommate and the two have been nothing more than casual acquaintances-- which makes it awkward when Caitlin wakes up in Simon's bed the morning after a wild party.
"I'm moving in with Amanda, well,
just moved in yesterday, so I guess I'll see more of you." She
smiled, but when he didn't respond she shifted on the edge of the
bed, her hands nervously twisting in her lap.
When she moved to stand
he caught her arm. "The next time I have to save
you, there will be consequences."
She let out an uncomfortable laugh,
"What?"
"That's the problem with girls
like you, they don't know their own limits."
"The problem with girls like me?"
Indignation laced her voice, she puffed her chest up, which was cute
as she was swimming in his t-shirt and her hair was a halo of frizz
around her head. She pulled her arm out of his grip. "I can take
care of myself."
"I'm sure you can, but I'm
warning you. The next time you get yourself into trouble like that I
might just give you the spanking you earned."
Her eyes went wide and her face
flushed red.
He expected a retort, why had he just
said that? Yes, he wanted to paddle her bottom until it was cherry
red. She had no business drinking so much and putting herself in
harm's way. But he barely knew this girl, if she told him to go to
hell it would be merited.
She stepped around him, "I need
to go," she mumbled, as she scurried out his bedroom door
.
He didn't even hear her feet on the
stairs before the front door slammed shut behind her. He shook his
head, it figured, he finally got a pretty girl in his bed and she
flew out the door the next morning without a second glance.
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Uh oh, I want to spank Simon for a comment like that!!
ReplyDeleteI really want to know what happened both before and after this scene :)
Gah, hit enter too soon. Grrr.
DeleteI like the way his mind is going. And I love the way her temper is leading her. I hope Simon might get to make that bottom cherry red many times. Look forward to this.
Simon may just get the chance to follow through on his threat... maybe, you never know :)
DeleteOh, those wild parties, how I remember them well. Well, not really but I've lived with the consequences of hearing all the crazy stuff I did. LOL.
ReplyDeleteI'm curious to know what he needed to save her from? And can't wait until he spanks her bottom for whatever it was. *giggles*.
I think Catlin is going to be having second thoughts about having moved in with Amanda. Especially now that she knows the guy next door is a spanker.
Great excerpt Casey. Thank you so much for your edition to this weeks WipWednesday. :-)
Caitlin knows the guy next door is a spanker, and she is strangely undeterred. Girl after my own heart :)
DeleteThanks so much for organizing, Melody, I had a blast!
I love the picture you paint of her leaving his bed ... and can only imagine the spanking scenes to come! Thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteThanks! And I am not even done with them yet, I probably have a few more scenes left to write.
DeleteI love you letting us in without your pants on! Very cute scene and I have a feeling - just a hunch, that Simon will get his chance to spank Caitlin!!! :)
ReplyDeleteYou, I would even let in if I had no bra on, we're friends like that ;)
DeleteI know what you mean about entertaining company before you've finished dressing. I love this snippet though, Casey. I sense her embarrassment and discomfort about waking up in his bed, and I really want to know where he found her and what she did exactly to end up there. Hope you invite us in next week, too.
ReplyDeleteThanks Kathryn! I cut out the beginning of the scene to just focus on his threat, but now it seems I have left an air of mystery! I didn't mean to do that, really!
DeleteBring on the consequences, silly girl doesn't know what she's missing. Knowing you she'll have a change of heart, Casey. Great snippet
ReplyDeleteinteresting scene- such a lot of teasing at what might be happening before and after this scene.
ReplyDeleteNo way is she just going to breeze out of his life after a SPANKING has been mentioned? Honestly, does the girl not know they're the best things since sliced bread? I'm thinking she'll come around... ~grin~
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