Welcome back to WIP it Up Wednesday! Last week I gave you a sneak peek of my new yet to be titled contemporary spanking romance. I still need a title-- it's saved on my computer as "Caitlin and Simon" so that is what we shall call it!
Our duo has just reunited again after their awkward 'morning after' encounter where we found them last time. Simon has not found another reason to threaten a spanking yet, but I am sure there is more of that to come, for right now Caitlin and Simon are just addressing some basic needs.
She straddled his hips, her knees
digging into the cushions on either side of him. She rocked herself
over his denim covered erection and felt his unmistakable length
pressing against her.
Simon moaned into her mouth as she
continued rocking. He wound one hand in her hair and tugged her head
back, disconnecting their kiss, but continuing his own journey
kissing down her neck, sucking and nipping as he went. His hand held
her in place, gentle pressure on her scalp as he tugged harder. His
other hand snaked around her hips and clamped her against him,
stilling her movements.
"Keep that up and I'll come in my
pants," he murmured against her as he continued his assault down
her throat.
She let out a sound, something between
a moan and a growl, her movements limited from his strong hands on
her body. She could no longer rock her hips, and her head was bent
back at an odd angle from his hand in her hair. But instead of being
uncomfortable she reveled in his bonds. She didn't have to think
about what move to make next. He was making all the moves for her,
she just had to sit back and let it happen. Her pussy gushed as his
tongue found the dip in her cleavage.
Still in the works and still unedited, so please be nice!
Also, check out all the other WIPers!
Still in the works and still unedited, so please be nice!
Also, check out all the other WIPers!
My God woman!! That was hot! NSFW!! Looking forward to this one, after that excerpt! phew!
ReplyDeleteSounds like a great start to me - don't think it needs any edits.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the feedback! I always get a little worried when no other eyes have seen it but me!
DeleteI am so happy to see Caitlin has reconsidered and went back to talk with Simon. But they're not talking here... *giggles* They're in the middle of a hot make out session. I love that pose Casey... I can see and feel what Caitlin is feeling.
ReplyDeleteGreat Excerpt. Sharing immediately! ☺
Thanks Melody! Caitlin can't seem to stay away-- thankfully that works out for all of us!
DeleteOMG! I <3 ed it!!! Be kind? Be kind to us by giving us more! I love that the only spoken line in this snippet is so frickin hot! Can't wait until next week!!
ReplyDeleteLOL, thanks Dinah, this had surprisingly little dialogue. I didn't realize the one line that made it in though!
Deleteflaming norah, woman, you sure know how to get my attention :) Hand in the hair, holding her still, delicious.
ReplyDeleteLove the hand in the hair...
Deletejust yum!
ReplyDeleteFanning myself here Casey! That was HOT!
ReplyDeleteLove the hand in the hair! Gets me every time! sigh... Great excerpt Casey. Keep 'em coming.
ReplyDeleteYou gotta love a hand in the hair, and a little tug to hold you in place...
DeleteThanks!