This week I am sharing a snippet from
my work in progress called Emmaline's Decision.
It's a Victorian romance that introduces a wealthy family in England
who want to marry their youngest daughter off to a man with a title
and status. Emmaline has other plans. This is a part in the story
where Emmaline has met up with the man she's in love with, Leo. She's trying to get him to go to bed with her and believes she's succeeded, but quickly realizes they may have been talking about two different things. Emma finds herself face down across Leo's lap and
it finally dawns on her that she might not be getting what she was
expecting-
“This isn't what I meant when I said I didn't want to
wait,” Emma felt her body easing under his caresses, but her heart
was beating in a panicked rhythm.
“I know perfectly well what you meant,” he sounded amused with
her.
“Please, Leo,” she wasn't above begging. This wasn't what she
wanted and she was used to getting her own way. If only he could see
the pout on her face, she was sure she could sway him.
“You just agreed to this,” he sounded annoyed now, and she was
sure it was because she was whining.
“Did I?” She didn't recall having said she agreed to him
spanking her. Emma felt a whoosh of air and then the sound of Leo's
hand smacking her bottom.
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I hate it when they deliberately misinterpret what you're saying. It's so unfair! However, I love it when it happens in stories. Wonderful snippet, Casey
ReplyDeleteI'm giggling. I agree with Kathryn - hate it when they misinterpret… :) Nice snippet Casey. Oh also, I love the look of your blog. It's one of the prettiest I've ever seen.
ReplyDeleteThanks ladies! And thank you Natasha, my husband set up my blog for me. He says he's going to "tweak" it this weekend, whatever that means, lol.
ReplyDeleteOh! This was unexpected. Sweet and tempting at the same time. Very nice. I want to read more!
ReplyDeleteI love it! It's always fun when a sassy young miss thinks she's getting her way and then the man she thinks she's manipulating lets her know otherwise.
ReplyDeleteMen! They speak a different language.
ReplyDeleteOh yeah. If he could only see her pout, that would absolutely bring this spanking to a stop. Works for me ALL the time. Yup, and you can absolutely trust me in this because--as everyone knows--I would never lie. lol
ReplyDelete*tee-hee* "...she was used to getting her own way..." I love this in any snippet or scene. This is hot, and like most, I'm giggling. She's getting what's coming. :)
ReplyDeleteLove the confusion -- that she thinks she'll get one thing, but he intends another.
ReplyDeleteYour last line is interesting choice of words -- that she FEELS the air displacement, but then HEARS the smack, instead of hearing the whoosh and feeling the spank -- or feeling both.
Ha ha! You know I love historicals... this sounds great!
ReplyDeleteVery nicely done, Casey. I agree with the rest of the gals. Hehe, evil man.
ReplyDeleteBTW, I love your blog. It looks great!
Can I borrow your hubby after he is done with yours?
:)
Blasted men! They only hear what they want to hear. LOL great snippet:)
ReplyDeleteThanks for all the comments! LOL Cara, in the next sentence she feels it, I only had 8 sentences, it was a delayed reaction... it's also a WIP so I can change the word choice.
ReplyDeleteFun snippet! Looks like she’s met her match. She may not be getting her way anymore :)
ReplyDeleteBeing used to getting your way is no excuse for bad behavior. My guess is that she'll be learning this quickly.
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