Last week I gave you a tease of Luke
and Mac from Catch a Falling Star on their first date. This part I am
sharing today is a few weeks after that. Their relationship is still new and
Luke is having a hard time getting Mac to open up to him. Mac thinks she's
doing a good job handling her problems on her own, but she finds that Luke will
only be pushed so far. She's been evading his questions about her snappish and
moody behavior and she’s reluctant to talk about what’s on her mind. In this
selection Mac has just tried to distract Luke in the shower, and she is
extremely pissed off that he didn't succumb to her methods.
Luke
reached down and ripped the towel from her body. She yelped out in surprise and
he pulled her towards the bed with him, “Luke!” was all she got out before he
had her turned over his knee, with her upper body on the bed and her legs
kicked out behind her.
He
had already laid down four hard smacks with his hand before she started trying
to struggle against his arm around her waist. He stopped with his hand resting
on her cheeks, still warm from the shower. “Are you ready to talk?” his tone
sounded like they were splitting a muffin over the Sunday crossword.
“No,”
she bit out and unsuccessfully tried to wriggle out of his hold.
“Have
it your way,” he said and started spanking her right where her butt met her
thighs. Mac cried out and let fly a string curses that would have made a sailor
blush.
I hope you'll check out the rest of
their story! Thanks for stopping in, and please check out all of the other
Saturday Spankings too!
I love this snippet, Casey, and I agree with Luke. If Mac has been snippy and moody and uncommunicative, then it sounds like he's applying the best remedy for what ails her. Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteNicely done. Enjoyed your snippet.
ReplyDeleteAw ... she won't talk. That means more spankings, and that makes me smile. Nicely done, doll.
ReplyDeleteLOL, I love the, 'have it your way'. He called her bluff. Great little snippet, Casey
ReplyDeleteLuke's doing it right. Communication's the key to any good relationship. Great snippet!
ReplyDeleteSplitting a muffin, hm? It must be a rather complicated affair to split a muffin in this household. :D
ReplyDeleteNice job!
Anastasia Vitsky
Thanks ladies! I loved writing about these two. So I can only hope people like reading about them.
ReplyDeleteGood one! Sounds like she had it coming.
ReplyDeleteI love the spanking for better communication scenario-- well done!!
ReplyDeleteGreat snippet Casey! I loved it :)
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed this scene! Sounds like he knows just how to handle her:)
ReplyDeleteThere are three kinds of communication in this snippet: verbal (she won't); physical (he spanks); and a lesson (his calm attitude when he spanks). Good work getting all that in!
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